Horror Hour by Leanne

Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 5:48pm

It was 3am, 1824.  The chandelier  was swing side by side the wind  is howling outside. A group of friends come in for shelter from the storm one of them gasps “wow” “shhh” siad two of them “Look a  ghost!” they scream all of them so they ran back out into the storm “AHHHH” they scream again thunder went off again.The theatre door vibrated as the ghost wanted to hurt them the children took no or a anwer so they walk in and then they saw IT.

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Mrs Willis wrote:

I love the way you used the weather-the wind howling, the thunder-to build tension. Well done, Leanne.

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