Haunted by Ethan

Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 5:44pm

1944 midnight.  In the abyss, Blitz was walking home when he saw the abandoned pizza place. He ran across the road to get to it,{creakkkk} the door creaked open. {spcwarc} Blitz wanted to know what that sound was “What was that?” he thought in horror.{BANG!} a part of the roof collapsed behind him. {drip drip} Water was now coming from somewhere! Blitz dashed out to get to the door.{aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!} Blitz was gone. He rushed out as fast he could go. Running home he could just see a man standing there staring at him. {You're lucky kid.}    

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Teagans mum wrote:

Lovely writing Ethan :) Very imaginative

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Mrs Willis wrote:

Full of action and horror-filled suspense-well done, Ethan!

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Rachel wrote:

Great sound effects makes you feel like your there well done 😊

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