Abandoned Train Station by Zain

Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 5:43pm

It was 11:35pm, I was looking for a train to London-20 minutes later I began to leave but the solid door slammed shut.   This place isn't haunted is it? I could hear creaks but just then a sinister figure ran rapidly across the room-my heart paused. I swooped my phone out of my pocket and dialed my mum - there was no signal. Eventually my fear was blocked out of my mind by the smell of rotten candy bars. As I headed to the candy store something dragged me into the kitchen, I screamed!

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Mrs Willis wrote:

Great use of a question, Zain, to which we all know the answer! This place isn't haunted is it? Of course it is!!!

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Rachel wrote:

Captivating writing everyone wants their mum in these situations well done 😊

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