A Night To Forget by Harry H

Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 5:27pm

It was approaching 2 am when I first entered the building, jumping up and down I was so excited! Me and my parents went to get the food we knew so well : popcorn. We entered room 4. The old, eroded theatre was jam-packed that night. The wooden chairs were very uncomfortable but I wasn’t going to let that dampen my spirits - I had waited months for this night to come! The lights began to flicker, a high-pitched screaming noise drowned the theatre. The lights suddenly came back on, what I saw next haunted me forever. 

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Mrs Willis wrote:

Brilliant Harry! You build up the tension well to the spine tingling ending where the reader cries out "What did you see?!"

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Roberts mum wrote:

It can't end there!!! Completely gripping and set the scene brilliantly.

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Rachel wrote:

Great writing I really want to see what happens next well done 😊

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