The Unknown by Omar

Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 5:33pm

Poor Luke.  He has seen the unseen.  It was at the time of the hurricane strike. 12:00 - with no time to spare Luke was creeping up the abandoned staircase.  Tik tok tik tok. “Is the clock broken? It’s already 3:00 AM!”

Tik tok.  A vast lightning strike cut out the power.

“Luckily I have a torch” now Luke wasn’t lying.  The clock shattered to pieces. “It's me Luke I told you you're safe that night It's me and you,you and me we will always be together.” Luke stared.  Here's the interesting part...

“NOOO IT'S  YOU”

“IT’S ME”

“YOUR MEANT TO BE DEAD!!!”

“THE SHOW WILL BEGIN MOMENTARILY”

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Mrs Willis wrote:

What a start Omar! 'Poor Luke. He had seen the unseen'-immediately you have set the scene for a terrifying encounter. Poor Luke indeed...

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Rachel wrote:

Great captivating writing leaving us sat on the edge of our seats well done 😊

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